So, I got to chapter 17 of Magellan's Witch before I had to really massively rewrite chapters 17 and 18. I've been fixing a lot of stuff. Sigh. The problem was shut up stupid nagging voice those chapters where my hero and heroine weren't together enough. I thought I'd fixed those, but I didn't shut up fix them quite enough. So today I was right, wasn't I? Shut up. You should have listened to me.

Actually, stupid nagging voice, I did listen. It just took a few days to know I needed to listen even harder. I need you, but you're really irritating to the right brain side of me.

Left turn people. I'm off to see if I need to make an even sharper left.

Labels: editing, Magellan's Witch