Today was the 2nd day of soccer tryouts. I had my purse, unlike last time, so off I went to Starbucks to continue going through the paper copy of Magellan's Witch. Here's a picture of one of the pages. The arrow means there's more on the back of the page. But, see? This is why printing my MS on 3-hole punch paper is so handy... I took the pic with my phone, so it's not the greatest quality, and yet you can see well enough what I was doing.



Am I blue about all that red ink? No way. That means good progress made. I'm thrilled I got all the way to chapter 14 before things fell apart enough that I had to stop. I'm a little freaked that I deleted two chapters, but hey, they weren't doing much for me anyway. I need a rock solid opening before it's worth my time to mess with later chapters. The only issue is, um, now what?

Tomorrow. Me. Notebook. Gym.

Labels: editing., Magellan's Witch