I set aside my problem chapter(s) and started a new one. It's going OK, but perversely, as I was writing, I was thinking, shoot, maybe this should be from her POV. The whole reason I was starting over was I was CONVINCED the scene needed to be from his POV. I think I need to write more than 2 pages to be sure. I'm tired. I'll brainstorm tomorrow AM at the gym, and work on whatever I work out then while my son's at soccer practice. Also, I've been worrying myself over the suspicion that I am short on plot. I need to think of something else to have happen. I'm making some adjustments in characters. My hero is surprising me. He's a way bigger smart ass than I ever thought, but that's the way he keeps coming out on paper, so I'm not going to fight it. Much. Sigh.
posted by Carolyn @ 6/26/2006 10:03:00 PM Permalink
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