Worked on elf chapters today. Things were going well for a bit there, then all of a sudden, it was all narrative boring crap in order to explain my heroine. Oops. I need another tack. Much as I like this particular scene, it may be better to start with a different pov character so that he can offer up what he knows about the heroine. Either that, or have a lot more talking going on.
posted by Carolyn @ 1/17/2006 08:30:00 PM Permalink
Liz Maverick
Jennifer Ashley
Sandy Schawb
Patti O'Shea
Marjorie M. Liu
Megan Frampton
Kristin Nelson
Miss Snark
Dystel & Goderich
The Rejecter
Evil Editor