Still on schedule with Crimson City, a bit ahead. I don't have enough words yet to know if I'm heading in the right direction, but it seems my h/h have quite a spirited relationship. Some mutual mistrust going on. Apparently, I'm more of a time waster than I thought. All those quick trips to do something else, just for a sec. But it's also pretty hard work. Not sure about my stuff tonight. But I have to move forward. I made up a demon-spawn monster and h/h had to fight it.

Actually, right now, I think it's just I hate that first draft. Ick. Thin. Silly. Stuff that's not set up or is just unsupported by motivation. Stick figures, or, in this case, cardboard monsters?

Would like to hear on The Rake, but then, anybody who's working this week is probably out of her mind.