Monday, November 29, 2004
Well, at about 92K. My impressions: the new opening chapters seem pretty darn good. I think the reason I keep moving some chapters around is that they didn't follow well what came before, so for a couple of those I wrote transition sentences. Think it worked. I was thinking that GML should not be hitting on PE at all until the chapter that sets everything in motion, but stuff keeps creeping in, so I think I'm going to just go with that because it's a CLUE. Oh, anyway. Have also been plotting the fp thing because, well, gee, just why not. It's Monday. The day has pretty much sucked.
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