Well, slashed away at the opening chapters again. Getting better, but, oddly, not shorter. (still at 94K+) This is because as I slash the crap, I'm shoring up and adding parts that are better. I hope. That's what I'm telling myself. I hit a difficult spot and so I went and spent an hour and a half chatting online. But then I went back and fixed it. Well, I think I did. Re-read Mary Janice Davidson's Undead and Unwed and then felt bad because I can't write like that. Sigh.
posted by Carolyn @ 10/08/2004 09:30:00 PM Permalink
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