My head's kind of spinning (think Linda Blair) but I think I've fixed the sag. I worked too late last night, at lunch at work and skipped the gym after work and went to a cafe to fix the two chapters I chopped up and changed pov on. And I just finished reading through some and I may be OK. Plus, something interesting happened in the BH chapter (which got moved from 13 to 7 in the general re-org of the sagging middle) that is likely to have a pleasing ripple effect throughout the beginning, which, however, must now be accounted for.
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