Well, I haven't looked at The Heir in quite some time. When I do read it again, hopefully it will be with a fresh eye. And hopefully, I won't want to cry. Have been working on my alternate proposal. I think I should give up the idea of a love scene because it isn't going to have anything to shore it up, no build up from anything previous. I'm tired. Request for material from one agent. No word from anyone else yet. Sigh..