71.7K So I'm going along. Parts I like. Parts are not so good. But the evil uncle did some things that will I think be a very effective foil. I reworked one scene today where every one is talking about one thing but referring to something completely different, and then it echoed wonderfully in another scene. I hope it holds up on re-read. At this point, its the small things that make huge leaps in quality and interest. I need to send Nonnie the revised synopsis. Which I will go do now. Plus Jenn C offered to read the MS and I may send it off soon for her to read just to get her reaction.