I'be been polishing, etc, working on my list of action items. Back up to 87K words. Last night I had an interesting idea. I think I might cut back on the ghost stuff and bring the OW SA stuff into the forefront. Naturally, this would be a lot of work, but I feel it would improve the pacing. I need to think about it a bit more, but it's one of those ideas that pop into my head and refuse to go away....